Friday 5 August 2016

A Moment in Time


 Reflection
I was learning to use strategies to add more detail to my writing.
 I need to add more detail to my writing. I also need to work on using onomatopieas.

1 comment:

Julie Prendergast said...

Wow! a great piece of writing Devaansh. I really liked the descriptive words you used. Keep building your vocabulary so you have a bank of words you can use in your writing. Keep up the great work.